i'm really depressed now
so beautiful i loved it
Well your writing is terrific, but yes I was dissapointed by how this turned out. life isn't a bed of roses but I have my own rough life- I like imagining things can be perfect when I read....I don't like crying at the end of stories. So while I'm upset with this and frustrated- thankyou for your work
wow great fic
Now we need an alternate, happy ending. Pam catches Bill in the garage and drags him into the house. He breaks free, starts the fight with Eric, and Sookie stakes him from behind because she's caught on that Bill just isn't right in the head and there's no saving him. Please? Cuz this ending makes me bummed out. :)
Interesting...Im glad Bill got what he deserved and that Sam was the one to do it even though he didnt know....
OMG I loved this one! I hope there is a second chapter of her and Pam after this one!
I felt I knew what was coming that either Sookie or Eric would meet their demise but not both of them. I can totally see Eric staking himself cause he had no other reason to live. It wouldn't be worth it to kill Bill. What would be the point. That would be too easy for Bill. He deserves to suffer. He doesn't think and Sookie paid the price. Now if she was human, would she have survived that? Not thinking so. Either way she would have met her death. It would have been interesting to see what happened if it was Eric who was killed and not Sookie. How would that effect Bill? Would he have felt they could still be together or would Sookie want to have him killed and could she do it.
Loved it nonetheless.
Excellent. Waiting patiently for your continuation. This just makes me dislike Bill even more now...lol...Never thought I'd be happy to see Victor again. Good job!
First, I loved Phantom of the Opera and had no idea that was Gerard Butler the first time I watched it. He was spectacular in it.
Second, love this series. Love that Sookie and Eric are together even in an undead capacity. Keep up the good work. Love your writing. Please write more!
I never thought Victor's final role would be essential for Eric and Sookie. It was sad but interesting in its unpredictable manner. I admire Eric's preparation for his death and Sookie's life...also for Bill's death. It serves Bill right! This is a wonderful story of Eric and Sookie that ended sadly but remarkably.Bravo!
It was unexpected from Sookie, but it was all worth it. I felt her need for having someone to love and stay with forever...Eric. It was wonderful!
I loved and hated this story. Loved...it was very unpredictable! Hated...it was brutal for Sookie and her Romeo, Eric. I was wailing in tears of sadness. Before I read this, I thought it's best for Sookie to become a vampire under Eric. However, this story gave a different light. I think it wasn't a wise choice for Sookie to become a vampire. When she was human, she was able to survive anything. As a vampire, she didn't. I don't blame Eric's actions for love's sake.
I didn't enjoy this when I read it for the first time as a newbie in this site. After reading the other wonderful stories by different authors, I appreciate this story very much because I felt the excitement of Eric and Sookie's next level of being bonded and vampires together forever. It was superb!
It's a rare experience now for Sookie and there's no turning back. I wonder how will they feed from humans without sex. I hope you continue your stories. It's a new world for them now. More power!
Eric's POV is wonderful! However, I felt happy that Sookie finally decided to be turned after hopeless waiting. I also felt sad because the vitality of human nature in Sookie is gone. Anyway, at least Eric and Sookie are together forever. Amen. Please create more.
So sweet...Eric killed himself because Bill killed Sookie...I woulda killed Bill first then offed myself lol
That was great!
That was ridiculously sad!!!! I almost cried.......god that was reaallly great though!
wow wish you would continue so we could see how her and eric are now sookies been turned :)
I have a review! Yay! I normally don't check these because there seems to be so little traffic here. I have continued this series on the fanfiction . com (take out the spaces) website. If you check that site and search for my author name, you'll find all of them. I quit posting here, not because I have anything against this site (I think it's very informative in terms of news of our Viking Vamp God) but because of the lack of traffic on the fanfic. Maybe that's because so many people read the stories in both places. Anyway, I'm glad you like the series. Thanks for reading!
What song is that? It's really perfect for Bill/Sookie!
It's off of Taylor Swift's Fearless CD. You can check out the video on aol.com. The song is really cool. I was listening to it in the car (I commute back and forth to work) and the idea for the story popped into my head -- I couldn't wait to get home and and crank it out!