hope u write more!
hope u write more!
I'm liking the story so far. Your right its definitley an unlikely pairing, but with Eric what is really unlikely? Also I tend to like long chapters, but please keep the story going.
And the award for favorite line in a fanction goes to "Pussy of all colors is placed on my pillow like mints in a hotel."
LMAO
LOL.. I loved this chapter.
I think you really shine when you are writing in the voice of Tara, Sookie and Lafayette. You GET them and when I read their dialogue I feel as if they are living and breathing.
Now with Eric I think when you write him you are missing something; his dialogue falls flat which stands out because you are wonderful at writing the others.
But I'm loving the story so far and think you should keep writing..
:)
I loved your use of "jump off" in your story.. can't wait to read the other chapters.
Love it! continue please :)