I hate Bill's freakin guts rite now! your doing good with this story. I love it, except Bill. lol
nice cliff hanger (:
Author's Response:Glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading! xoxo
Elle
i like. this is intresting. i wil let it grow on me. by nature i am team eric, ie why im on the site. but bill is a douch. the things i would do if eric was MY best friend haha.
"Kick him in the nuts!" The fight scene was really funny! Jason is good for something. Still reading and enjoying . . . Now that this story is finished . . . more time to write "Washed Ashore"? I'm shameless!
hmm... I'm lost - I was wrong with my assumed direction of the story... which is great! :D Time to turn the page...
Author's Response:This story didn't go in the direction I planned either. I never map anything out. I just write what comes to mind. LOL!
Thanks for reading. xoxo
Elle
That Aunt Linda thing has me stomped... You've taken a whole new angle with all the characters that I just don't know what to anticipate... but it is so much fun!!! :)
K, k... here's my guess with Aunt L- Is Hadley going to pop up soon? Is she good friends with Pam? How come Pam dislikes Bill so much?
Alright, I think I questioned in my thnking pretty decently... hehe... I'm hooked- gotta get to the next chapter.
:D
Hi-larious & hot!
“Mmm, you smell good sweetheart. Is that a new perfume?”
Yeah, it’s called I was just finger fucked.
Eric and Sookie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LtFGUUaZ-nw&feature=BF&list=PLC9E401755DDB6F10&index=34
Desseeeert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bill is an Asshole.
Eric is.... Soooo Hot!!!!!!
More please
This is an awesome story and I love your writing. Can't wait to see what happens next!
So not nice to leave us hanging! At least Bill got what was coming to him. I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:Thanks for reading. I'm working on chapter 13 now. It was kind of mean but lemons take work and there are lemons to be had. xoxo
if she's anything like the sookie from the books, she'll go to Bill... She always did tend to do things the wrong way.
Dessert was delicious, thank you.
Author's Response:You are welcome. I realized a few of my chapters had sentences scrambled so I went back to fix them. Last chapter might make a little more sense toward the end now. Thanks for reading! xoxo
You're too cruel to stop there!
Good story. I like "human" Eric and Sookie stories. Can't wait for more.
This is the first story I have read at this site. I am enjoying it. Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response:Wow! Thanks. That means so much to me. Glad you are enjoying it. More to come soon.
Uh-oh.. what is Linda and Billy up to?? Go Sookie.. go get that Viking~
What ever Linda is up to, I hope you post soon...didn't see an Aunt Linda coming into the equation. She know something about Bill? Gosh, who in their right mind would chose Bill over Eric, I don't know! Like I said, post soon!!!!
Author's Response:Thanks so much for reading. We won't be getting right to what Linda's up to but I want let you stew for too long. I have no idea who would choose Bill over Eric, but we have to realize Sookie isn't very experienced in love and love makes you stupid. Here's to hoping she gets a little smarter sooner rather than later. xoxo
Oh Please update ASAP!!! Thsi is such a great story!
Author's Response:Thanks for reading and your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope to keep you interested. Next chapter should be up soon. xoxo
WOW This is just great! I love this story! I vote for Dessert...lol
Oh this is AWESOME!!!!!!
Good chapter...I really wanna know her decision though!!
I would choose, hands down, dessert first!! great story and I cannot wait to read more!