The storyline is going great. Am sorry to hear about your Fader. No matter what happens you'll always have your muse for writting. I go through the same problems at times with my art. Take your time in writting. I give your story a two thumbs up and a 'On the edge of your seat' award. :) I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Holy Moolie!! This is crazy! Great work.
Just read this and have to read some more to get a real sense, but I want my 10 points for knowing that the title is from Grease!
Loved this story! It has the sweetness, intimatcy, and the passion that I was missing from the most recent book. You are great! Thank you so much!
its about time!!! i was beginning to worry that you werent going to have hem back together!!!!
So glad you're continuing w/ the story! Ah . . . Emma's in danger! & now there are like 5 vampires out to find her even if it means they meet the final death. Cool beans!
Love the song!
Just found this series last night and finished reading it tonight. You did wonderful job! I enjoyed every bit of it.
Glad you liked the story! It was a lot of fun to write.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Loving the desire between them to have a child. Very well written!
Love it so far!
"I had asked Sookie if they still made chastity belts, but I’m not quite certain she realized my seriousness. There was still time to assign Pam to look into the task however." ~ this made me laugh so hard, I nearly spit water all over my monitor. My cat won't be sitting on my lap any time soon!
Can you imagine my surprise when I turned on my computer and found my very favorite story, that I thought was finished, was udated? I loved it! I agree it's something different and fun to read about.
I enjoyed your little chapter very much, Sarafina! I too have been trying and experimenting with my fanfic. My new thing is taking minor characters and giving them their own story. I have never seen it done in the fanfic universe and I thought it would be fun trying it out. I really enjoyed this piece of fanfic and I really like your spin on pregos Sookie. Good luck on your writing and can't wait to read more!!! :)
cher this was ever to delicious! more please.......
I Loved this chapter!!!
PLEASSSEEE sarifina! you have to write a sequel!! this is still one of my favorite stories on this site and i'd hate to have it stop right there. please find your inspiration for another sequel:)
First, I absolutely love your story! I read the entire thing over a couple days because I just couldn't put it down. I found this chapter, in particular, to be very emotional for me. My heart broke for both Sookie and Eric when she asked him if he had been with anyone else and heard his pained response.
I love this story. I want to know what happens wth the children and Eric's brother. You have given intense story ideas please keep writing on this line.
I have read all of the Sookie Stackhouse novels and never wanted to go back to re-read them but yours is absolutely FABULOUS! I find myself coming back just to re-read chapters in case I missed something and usually I do. This was a feel good read and with Eric's POV it gave us something we were missing in the Sookie Stackhouse series! Please find the motivation to continue this...We need to know what is going to happen. I actually feel guilty reading such fabulous writing for free. It actually inspires you to never give up on your dreams!
great work! (btw: i'm glad you ended this story - i was totally addicted; i used to come here just to see if there was a new chapter every day!! lol).
and i agree w/ you: this was a great end! but what about the AP? won't you write another chapter with her conversation with sookie? the AP specifically stayed another day to speak with her... pleeeease, tell us what was that about!!...
either way: congrats! great job, awsome new characters (robert, eric's brother!), great use of all the "real" characters (dermot, stan, pam, etc., etc...), and i just loved, loved, loved the "sookie's POV vs eric's POV part"!!! :)
Thanks for a wonderful story. It got me excited, laughed, emotional and drawn into your story. It's sad to see it end but I do agree it is a right point to wrap it up. Hope you'll come up with ideas for some short stories or even a sequel.
i loved it!!! i'm really hoping we get to read more of this story!!!
OH. MY. GOD.
i just loved this story soooo much. i love how u show a personal, deep love between eric and sookie and their babies:') i almost cried at some chapters!
so sad to see it end, but i think it was a good way to sum it all up. i just hope and pray that u'll find inspiration to show what the babies are like, ya know the birth and everything, what sookie and eric are like as royalty. stuff like that
awesome job Sarifina, loved it:)
Aww i have loved this story and definitely agree this is a good place to end it.
But i really would love to read about when Sookie has the babies and how Eric starts to take over his now kingdom etc!!
Thanks for keeping me entertained :D
Awesome!!!! Awesome!!! Awesome!!! That is the perfect way to end it! I have enjoyed this story from the first post. Can't wait to see any of your add ons!