I really like how you made it from sookies and Eric pov also Pam's I was really nice also I'm interested I what happens next great job this was awesome
This is super funny with Gran in the picture now. I love it. :)
Don't worry. I used Google Translate to read what that jibbersih was when i started reading your story. I prefer this over the original version of the True Blood. :) Team Eric all the way.lol
I just started this story, but I just had to say that I LOVE this exchange! Can't wait to read more!
This is incredible. I still can't get over the Pam chicken incident and Eric laughing until he cried. I like Sookie like this very intelligent and not as stubborn as she is in the books. Ofcourse she defies Eric especially when it comes to handling offenders in the bar but other than that she knows when to obey him. This is great. Thank you.
Oh men! This is so funny. I love that testing the waters with Eric. When he said "I felt that." that one had me laughing. You're a good writer.
that was funny as shit! i was rolling!
OMG!!!! Love this story!!! You have to keep writing :D
Realmente, no me equivocaba. Una historia maravillosa!!! Es muy favorecedor tu visión de Sookie. Charlaine cometió un grave error al hacerla estúpida (o tonta, que viene a ser lo mismo). Si Sookie fuera más inteligente en los libros (y en la serie), podria evitar la myoria de problemas que le ha causado su estupidez. Sigue, porfavor.
luego comento, luego comento!!!! Bsts, seguro q esta genial, la leeré en el mobil!!!!
I think this is the best fanfiction story I've ever read. Witty, intelligent - well done! Keep the chapters coming!
Ths story is really interesting, i love the smarter sookie, she's sassier and more head strong around eric also the one thing i hated about sookie was all the crying but in your story she hasnt cried once.
Great story and i hope you write more
OMG....that was one of the funniest chapters I have come across in a very long time....I laughed so hard I was crying!!!! This is a great story...I LOVE this Sookie!!! (and this Eric)
Please write more I want to read more from this story
I really liked your story...well written! I would have liked more dialogue between Eric & Sookie after him taking her virginity. I want to know how she felt about it and how he felt about taking it? All the emotions that went through both their minds during and after. Can't wait for you to continue! Thanks for a nice read!
Wicked dude wicked. I love how Sookie never meets bill but goes to Fangtasia on her own. N eric bein her first. Priceless. U soo have to put more sex scenes in. But it would b diffcult now that Sookie gran is sleepin in the same house. (talk about arkward).
loved this story can't wait for the next chapter
Don't know what happened to the review i wrote for this the other day!?
I'm loving your take on the books and your humour! i'm smiling and smirking for all i'm worth as i read. Glad you put the note at the beginning about having published more of this story on FF.net. i went over there and finished all that was written there. had a hard time finding it though. I did a story search but it didn't come up. not sure if it was me being techologically challenged or their server was. Any way, could you ammend your note at the start of this story to include your FF.net pen name so others can enjoy your brilliance too?!
I think this may be my new favorite piece on this site. I am really enjoying it. More please!!!
Love this story! Good to see Sookie not so clueless. Hope you update soon!
I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one.