This is amazing! This storyline is fantastic, please continue -I love your work!
Hahaha, you hit everything on the head that I've argued with the screen while watching True Blood. Nice job. Only one quibble - you abruptly switched from third person omniscent to 1st person with Niall and it really jarred me at first until I figured who you meant.
Hahaha "ohhh Beeel!"
I actually read your story on fanfiction.net so that I can get the chapters sooner, but I thought I'd review here. Your story is AMAZING. I check every hour or so for an new chapter, and most of the time, there is one! You say that you write for a living, and I have no doubt that you make a fine one! Please keep writing; I'm officially addicted!!
More More More please I love your story.. You are a very good storyteller. I check everyday to find out what happens in your story.
i like it :) sure Eric is a bit gushy at points.. but its fitting with the story, it flows well, and he shows soft spots were Sookie is concerend all her Friends do
Wow, I feel like a child on Christmas morning with all of these new chapters. What a happy surprise. Thank you!
I hope that Sookie has her act semi together now. I won't hold my breath. I wish that Sookie would appreciate Eric... one can only hope and dream. Sookie's new and improved house sounds wonderful. Nice twist with Godric being back in the picture. Didn't see that coming and Eric can use all the help he can get right now. Having Debbie re-appear = nothing good at all. You know the other shoe has to drop with her around.
Well, I am on the edge of my computer chair now waiting to see what happens next.
I love your story. It is very good please write more.
Wow! Couldn't stop reading! I just love this story --TB Season 4? Huh...What's that????
Pat
Author's Response:Thank you so much for continuing to read and review this story. I'm glad you're liking it. TB Season 4 means the fourth season of the show.
I'm thinking your absolutely right; it is going to be a cluster. I'm scared I may have to stop watching, and just keep reading and writing stories:)
Wow! I'm loving your story --wish you were a writer on retainer for TB --I picture a clusterfuck of epic proportions next season...sigh...
Pat
I am so happy to find your story. I love how you start off where everything left off... but, with a twist. A big perfect, plot twist! I like seeing a caring Niall. I'm annoyed with Sookie, but then when am I not. She drives me nuts with her pigheadedness. I hope that you can write her to see Eric for what he is. I can't wait for more!
Thanks for writing such an inventive plot.
Author's Response:Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. I'm not a fan of TB Sookie at all. I feel like she walks around with Bill blinders on, but I will get to a point where that will change. I'm a big fan of a happy ending:)
And thank you for complimenting my plot idea. It means a lot to me; I've been kicking the idea around for a while, and decided to go for it.
Again, thank you so much!!!
Jane
i love how you are making things right again! Right now everythings a mess.
Author's Response:Thanks for taking the time to comment on my story. I hope that I can continue to keep the readers happy with my idea of how things should go from this point forward.
While I understand AB's point of changing things up to keep us all guessing, I don't like the fact that he's totally bastardizing the characters in the process.
Again thank you for reviewing my work, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Jane
I like the concept of your story --wish that AB would have the sense to go this route! Can't wait to see more!
Pat
Author's Response:Thank you for the review...The way AB's team write's annoys me to no end. But him keeping her in the dark and damaged is where my idea came from. I wanted to see what would happen if Sookie were actually able to make an informed decision.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I posted 10 chapters today I'm just waiting for them to be validated or whatever.
Again, thank you so much I really appreciate your taking the time to tell me you're enjoying my little spin on TB:)
Jane
I love it please keep going I really want to know how it ends. I am hooked!!
Author's Response:Thank you so much!!! I will continue to write this story, as long as people continue to want to read it.
Thanks again for taking the time to review my work.
Jane
I must say that this is a wonderful story. I love your imagination and can't wait to see where you take this story. You seem to have blended the books and the series together wonderfully along with a lot of your own imagination tha is not out of character for the characters. Please update soon I can't wait to see if Sookie falls in love with Eric. Please make them fall in love.
Author's Response:Thank you so much!!! You're my first review, and you totally made my day:) I'll probably have about 10 chapters up by the end of today. I'm not sure how quickly the website updates them, but I have loaded through Chapter 6 already.
I hope that I can continue to keep you entertained with my writing style, and also be able to keep the characters true to form.
Have a great afternoon sweetie!
Jane