I enojoyed the story - lots, but I do think you need to get someone to beta for you - then this would be far far better. I hope there is more xx
Sorry, but I can't get past the misspellings and incorrect grammar. It's just too distracting. Do you have a beta?
I dont have beta sorry, I'll be more careful from now on.
I wonder how Eric is going to feel having to share his maker with Sookie.
Please tell me that you haven't given up on this story. I've been hoping that you'll up date soon. Good luck writing!
i promise i havnt given up on the story, schools been getti9ng in the way but the next few chapters will be up in a few day :)
Oh gods... Eric bite she?
Oh, gods... that's NOT good for Sookie....
I love the story of a street smart Sookie who knows Vampire politics stuff. I reckon it is Godric who was the vampire that look after Sookie during her growing up. I am really looking forward to reading about the rescue at FOTS church and the rest of the Dallas stuff. I like how she is not fooled by Bill.
Love the story!! Can't wait for more!!
DANG! this was an awesome story! I'm enjoying it immensely!!!
I wonder if it's Eric?!
Can't wait til you write more!!!