lol! I loved the book Each Peach Pear Plum as a kid (and own a copy to this day). I think you did a great job of capturing the rhythm and rhyme of the book with a hilarious and naughty storyline. Well done!
Oh finally, someone knows each peach! my hubs said he'll never be able to shake the images i created when he reads the book to our 2yr old :)
I love this, and I'm not even all that into poetry. It was like a song, so sexy, so fluid. I could just eat it up. ;-) You should write more if you have talent such as this.
spanks muchly for reading it. poetry isn't really my thing either but i thought it was a bit of fun, even if a little childish.
i like it
Made me laugh.....my favorite line was "In for some fun at the club of Fangtasia, Eye spy Chow the barman from Asia"....don't know why but that line struck a funny bone in me. Guess I picture him stoically taking in Eric et.al and never cracking a smile.....heehee
Thank you very much. I'm glad someone laughed :)
now that i'm over my nerves about posting, i'll have to try and write something more meaty!