I love it!!! Haha! In your face Sookie in YOUR face!!! Does this make me a bad person??? :-( (I don't think so. haha) I totally agree with you 'Rubyesque'. Sookie doesn't see Eric for what he really is. I mean he sacrifized a lot for her but she always comes back into hating him. She doesn't appreciate what hes been doing for her. Sometimes she's a really mean woman. tsk tsk tsk.
Would you please write more chapters???? Please????
I'm shocked you found this little story since it's been months and months since I've posted it. The reason for this inspiration has since changed as my path in life has diverged, so I'm not sure I'm in the right head space to continue this story. I am surprised I got as many chapters out of this since it started a s a writing challenge. Thanks for reading and if I finish it, hopefully you'll still be willing to read it.
This is so delectable. I am still waiting for the scrumptious chapter update. There's absolutely nothing wrong with it; from the fiery argument with Sookie to the strange, intimate relationship with this new, sweet-smelling young woman, you have done a wonderful job in capturing the passionate emotions within Eric. I love the struggle he is having with allowing himself to be... tender... with Holle. It's a surprise that he can feel this for another after all he's given to Sookie. OR maybe Sookie has broken that hard, thick shell he's erected over the years to give him the ability to accept another so close...
I would love to see what happens next between them. Seems he has someone new to train, nurture, and - my favorite - make love to. Mmmm... And she has such a temper. *wicked grin*
I'm happy you are enjoying this and I hope to continue it until the delicious conclusion.
Lol, I'm sure she does have a temper, especially when faced with two delectable twins. I wonder how she'll react when he uses them as examples for hunting and feeding...oh wait, I DO know!
loving the lemons
Thanks! Those are probably the hardest moments for me to write and I'm glad someone appreciates it.
I'm intrigued! So far, so good! 7 questions?
I'm glad. Lol, yes I'm working on it again. I kinda lost it for a bit, but it's slowly coming back.