Just have to say STELLAR STORY! Really kicks ass!
Yikes! Now that was a cliffhanger!! :)
I tried to leave a review yesterday but it wouldn't let me.....but I totally agree with Chamberlin below....ERIC has no ROOM to be jealous or demand that Sookie be faithful when he has not been...not only that but he has not claimed Sookie as "his"...leaving her vulnerable!! Nicholas protected her without question....I actually like Nick and would love for Sookie and Nick to have a "go" and make Eric have to work to get Sookie back in his good graces.....things come way too easily for the Viking sometimes LOL....Bill was and never could be competition for Eric but Nicholas could definitely give him a run for his money!!!
Eric has absolutely no room to talk or question Sookie after everything he's done with Elvira and Kelly and god knows who else since he and Sookie started kissing and liking each other. I hope she goes for Nick right about now. (Although he did has Elvira and Dawn in Eric's office!), but that was before he knew Sookie. I hope Nick can spot (smell) other women on Eric and calls Eric out on it, in front of Sookie, for him getting all high and mighty and jealous. Sookie has a decision to make. A maybe faithful (so far) Nick, or manwhore Eric. Proof is in the pudding...er blood.
Nicky is such the troublemaker, Funny
Well, I know Eric is a vamp and all, but he sure can't miss Sookie too much feeding and fucking from others every night he is gone. Sookie deserves better. I was hoping she'd at least "date" Kyle, or maybe even Nick.
Author's Response: Don't worry. :) Eric is having trouble coping with his feelings and he hasn't felt anything like it. It confuses him and after a 1000 years of losing his humanity it comes back again (thanks to Sookie). And he doesn't really know what to do. Thanks for your review. :)
Go Eric. Always good to have friends and "leverage"
Author's Response: Haha. :)
I just read your whole story and so far...I loved it! I really like Nick and find it funny he drives a motorcycle. (that's a were thing, isn't it?)
I also love how you put the vampire politics in the story. Really cool. Please! Please! Make more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to make an update real soon. :)
Loved this chapter. Eleanor is a sweetie and will be good for Sookie to hang out with. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm thinking of giving more space for Eleanor. :)
nice chapter. Elanor seems really nice. Nicholas is gong to be a real blast I can tell.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like them. :)
I really enjoy this story, thanks for update, Nick sound so cute for a vamp.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story. I hope I can finish the next chapter soon. And yes...Nick is cute.
i like the relationship of nick and eleanor. also, i wish you can tell us more about nick. he looks really interesting! eric should kick sophie's ass!
i'm waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm going to write more of Nick and Eleanor. Don't worry about Eirc. He'll have his chance. ;)
Great chapter! I really liked Eleanor and hope you include her in your story again. I do hope that Eric gets back soon and that Sookie does not start to like Nick. I don't think they would be good for eachother in the relationship sense, maybe just friends. I just don't really trust him. Bring Eric back!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad you like it. I plan to have Eleanor in the next chapter and give Nick a chance. He's not that bad ;). But I appreciate everything. Thank you so much! :)
My guess is not Eric but Nicolas. hmm he sounds yummy BTW.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
wow Cathy is a biatch. glad she is helping kyle though. Hope it wasnt a setup
Author's Response: You might be a mindreader. I was going to make Eric set the whole thing up because Sookie didn't want to go out with him but I quickly changed my mind. Haha
Interesting twist. So no scumbill....yet. Kewl.
LOVE your story!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm really glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter right now. :D
Very enjoyable 1st chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it. :)
this is sooooo cool hope you post the nxt chapter soon...
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm happy you liked it. :D
wasn't sure if you caught the last review before the story was deleted, but i just wanted to let you know again that the dancing was an excellent idea! looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah I read it. Thanks for your review. I'm really sorry about the whole deleting thing. I appreciate you reading this :D