Hello... I hope everything is okay with you... Been checking back here every so often doing my impression of a mad stalker... I really hope you continue with your stories as I love them do much... JoxX
Loved it! Your Eric and your Sookie are great.
Brilliant as always... looking forward to more... can't wait to see what Gran makes of Eric
Still loving it... Not getting the chapter updates to my email for some reason though.
This is such pleasure to read. It's written in such a crisp and smart way. You have a gift for dialogue and plot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comments... I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much. :D
Their conversation and physical interaction is beautiful and loving. When she finally overcomes her darkness, there will be fireworks between then to make the 4th of July look like a pale copy..
Lorena is the perfect bitch here. And Bill, trying to put the moves on Sookie if she and Eric don't work out. Love the idea of Sookie using herself as the model for the character in the screenplay.A story withiin the story.
Delightful first date as they dance around each other..
She's trying really hard to avoid the attraction she has to him (and of course he to her). Love the psychic.
Nice end for Franklin, I know the TB version of him was quite different from the SVM one, but he needed to "move on" to the next plane of existence after what he did to Sookie.
Love the smart dialogue. not sure who is more surprised here.
Fantastic chapter! I'm really enjoying that Eric isn't embarrassed to show a little bit of affection to Sookie in front of other people. I thought Eric slowly pushing Sookie's panties under the couch while she was frazzled was funny, as well as Eric thinking that a witch was going to be sending Gran and Jason over when she said "a spell".
Just found this story, love that it is completely different from canon. Look forward to reading more
I love this. Your characterisation is spot on, your dialogue is great and the whole thing is a pleasure to read. Please don't give up - you are really good at it.xx
So glad you are back!!! I adore this story......and love this chapter between them....I can't wait until Gran and Jason make their way to CBP and meet the crew....this should be entertaining!!! LOL
I'd certainly be willing to Beta you if you think we would be a good match...I have no idea how to contact you other than review....IS there a way to leave a private message or something for you??
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! It's going to be so much fun to write Eric and Gran again.... and Pam and Jason, hee hee hee. And I would love to have you beta. My email is firstname.lastname@example.org and my skype is anovelmadness. Just hit me up on either one, and I'll start sending you my new chappies. (Thanks so much for volunteering!)
I am so glad you have started writing again. I really enjoy this story.
Your writing is still as good as ever - please keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ::hugs:: And I'm working on a new chapter that's almost finished, so it should be posted by tonight or tomorrow.
That was awesome!!! I just love the way your write... it's like the words become more than just words and if you wanted you could reach out and touch them, wrap yourself in some while activley running from others... Fantastic and rare talent and i read a lot, alot. I can honestly say i have never felt so emeshed into a story as i have this one- hey you've turned me into an internet story stalker and i have a stricked non stalking policy-LOL
Even though you seem to feel less than awesome yourself just now I can asure you it does not show in your writting.
If you want a sounding board for your story, I am happy to help, but my dyslexia renders me a bit useless for spell checking and the like...
Author's Response: Anytime I need a boost you always seem to be there... ::mad hugs:: All I need to do is read one of your reviews and I feel like I've got my juice back. Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. You're a wonderful person and a favorite reader of mine. Thanks bunches and bunches for stalking my stories. ;) As for a beta, I think I'm going to take jsnider up on her offer. But thank you so much for offering. ::hugs::
Fantastic chapter! I was definitely surprised when Eric asked her to move in with him, but so very delighted. I think that Gran and Jason coming down to meet Eric will be awesome. I hope they meet Godric too.
I'm happy that you're feeling better but am sad that you're feeling less creative. I'm sending you you a gigantic wave of happiness and friendship, with a side of creativity and hugs, all on a glitter rainbow...*sprinkles fairy dust all around*.
I wish you all the best and you'll be in my thoughts and prayers!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! You're so sweet. ::dances in the fairy dust:: I'm working on another chapter, so I think it's helping! As for the Bon Temps visitors... I just can't wait for Gran and Eric, and Jason and Pam.... Hee hee hee.
Pleeeeeease give us more of your addictive story.... the stalking of this story is just getting embarrassing now.... take pity :D
Love your stories but you are killing me with the wait for the update on this one. Please get that muse going and put me out of my misery!
Much better. Sookie hurt Eric's feelings. Sometimes she is just so self centered. She needs to make it right with him.
Another awesome chapter! Sookie came to him and they are working to make things right. Yea! I wonder when Bill is going to show up next?
Aw!!!! all happy now i just love the way you write! can't wait for more from these two JoXx
Author's Response: Yay! I love them happy, lol. Thanks for appreciating my writing style. Sometimes I worry I'm too wordy, other times not enough. Glad to make you happy :)
What a treat to check (stalk) this story to find two chapters well the first did not dissapoint on to the next to see if Sookie recovers from her foot in mouth disorder!!!
Author's Response: Lol, glad you're happy. I like them happy too, so it's a little hard for me to keep them mad at each other. But sometimes feet do indeed become inserted in mouths, lol.
What a great chapter....
So glad they are back together again and happy. They both have a lot to learn about each other....
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And you're right, they do have a lot to learn about each other. Sookie has pretty much been isolated in her hometown, and Eric has traveled the world through the ages. I think their personalities, dare even I say their souls, are just connected, though, so eventually they just come on back together.