I feel so much better! Sometimes I think I might be crazy be so invested in two characters and their relationship. But then I remember that I don't give a crap if I'm weird! Anyway, this was an excellent chapter. I really like that Sookie told Eric what happened and also made sure to mention that she's never done any of this before and that she is human. I think it's probably a first for both of them, love and a relationship. Update soon please and let Sookie buy some furniture!
Author's Response: Honey, if you're crazy than so am I. My computer is filled with images of the characters, photoshop art, and fan fiction about these two. Did I mention the MVs? No, well they're in there too. In a strange way they're like extended family, lol, that I too am obsessed with. And yes, I don't give a good damn if it is weird, either. :) Besides you're wonderful, always following my stories and leaving me pretty comments. As for Sookie and Eric in the story, I feel that the two of them will always find their way back to each other. They're just... meant. And I think this TB season with Sookie pushing off both the boys, fan fiction is going to be our only Sooric fix, lol. But as to the furniture, you think I should have her buy some or just move into the Coffin Bait Productions staff housing? It's pretty plush in my head, lol. Let me know what you think...
Chapter 12 was amazing! Eric completely flipped out! First, he freaked out about the depth of his desire. Then, he was confused and hurt by her comments because he has feelings. Crazy! I loved it! Keep up the Fangtastic writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was trying to set up their relationship as a little angsty because this was supposed to be a darker story, but honestly.... I like them happy, lol.
I meant to add to my earlier review...my favorite line of the chapter...."only the orgasmic sensation of being stretched all the way up to my heart" Our Sookie girl has got it bad. LOL
Author's Response: You like that huh? I thought it was suitable ;)
Great Chapter - although I was sad by the end of it. Hope they work things out... Her 'First time' didn't turn out as special as she would have liked gived the way things ended.
Hope they learn to trust one another and find their way back to each other.
Author's Response: Don't worry! Happiness is on it's way... I just had to add some angst to get them on the same page. Both of them have issues they need to resolve before their relationship can go any further. As for the first time, I wanted it to be something a post parental murder/suicide Sookie would do. She's a little bit harder than regular Sookie, and that affects her judgment. And at first she won't understand that she misjudged Eric... But their bond will be stronger for it, me thinks.
I was so sad by the end of the chapter.....I know Sookie was unfair to Eric there at the end but he does have a history, everyone is uber surprised by his interest in her and tells her he doesn't do long term and he just took her virginity on the office floor with no effort to make it special for her really---not every girls dream for her 1st time. He needs to step back and really consider her trust issues and her expectation that pretty much eveeryone leaves her in some way or another...people with the exception of Gran, are not reliable--why would Vamps be different.
Sookie needs to cut Eric a little slack too and try to remember that since he obviulsy doesn't do alot of relationships....he may not be great at giving her all that she needs but he has made huge efforts to be there for her......I hope they can find their way back to what they had going in his office the other night when he showed her a side he rarely shows etc....
Author's Response: You're completely right. This chapter was sad for me too. I think this Sookie is a little bit more savage than the Sookie who's parents died. Or maybe I should say harder. She has had to witness tragic events, and instead of addressing them she's buried them. That would lead to confusion in anyone, and Sookie is no exception. As for Eric, he is trying his best. Trying for an emotional connection with a human is very new to him, and he's sure to need some time to process. I don't plan on leaving them apart for too long. Most of the next chapter. I think they will both seek common ground with each other because the connection between them are very real.
Oh no! I feel so badly for Eric, and Sookie as well. They both need to make a bit more allowances for the other. Eric needs to understand that Sookie has had no other relationships and remember that he has had a pretty active past with the ladies. But she needs to understand that he has feelings too and she hurt him by doubting his affections for her. I really hope that he opens the bond back up soon or they will both be suffering for it. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I agree completely. I feel badly for him too. :( But in order for Sookie to really except any feelings directed towards her by Eric, she has to examine her own feelings and address her fears connected to the obsessive intimacy she observed with her parent's relationship. I think it's time for a visit with the resident studio Psychic...
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Another update so soon- how you spoil us- what a chapter! fans one self...just loving this story Xx
Our little firey fairy. Eric is being very patient with her. Very good chapter. More please
Mmm...mmmm....what a complete treat!! Two chapters in quick back to back!! and that last chapter was H-O-T....I love this Sookie and Eric and I am SO GLAD your muse is in full force....I can't wait to see where this story takes them!!!
Author's Response: :D I'm so glad you liked it... I do have so much fun with those two. Hehehe... And truthfully, I have no idea where I'm going with this. Probably end it around the time the movie 'Road to Run' goes to premiere. That leaves me plenty of space to play with them... And hopefully my muse keeps up!
Sweet chapter! I love how understanding Eric is. It was really kind of him to tell Sookie a little about his family too. I'm happy that they exchanged blood, very sexy!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know Eric is a big bad ass, but with Sookie I feel he gets to just be himself. That's the power of their relationship. And the bond is going to get a lot stronger as we go along, and not just because of the blood. :D
great chapter, and all the luck in the world on your book!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've sold 4 copies, lol, but it's still early yet. :)
I only just stumbled across this story... I am loving it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for joining me! I'll try to keep the chappies coming for you!
Thank you so much.... seriously weirding myself out with the stalking and do appologise for that. I am always checking if you have updated. And this update did not dissapoint... wonder what Bill was researching... Mmm... Lorena is still a bitch in what ever universe you visit LOL.
Please keep it coming. . .it's just embarassing being a internet FF stalker...haha
Author's Response: Lol, no worries. It's nice to have a fan who loves my work. ::hugs:: I'll try to keep my muse up for you.
Great chapter! I am a little worried that Sookie may fall for Compton's fake charm. I really hope that she doesn't because he's pathetic and of course Eric is MUCH better. I will definitely check out your published book. Congrats!!!
Author's Response: No worries... Compton is going to be anything serious, just a little plot tension. I'm an Eric girl all the way ;P
Nice chapter!. Can't wait for more.
great update hope theres more soon!!!
I'm definitely excited to see what kind will happen in Sookie's meeting with Bill and Lorena. I'm glad that Bobby wasn't a her to Sookie too. Cool chapter. I'm happy you have Internet now!
2 Chapters in one week!!! Is this an eary Christmas present??? Love this story!! Can Sookie indeed allow Eric in??? Can't wait to read more!!
As always, Jason is clueless --he doesn't begin to comprehend what finding their parents dead has done to Sookie.
Ahhhh..the sexual tension mounts --too bad Eric's not allowed to :-)
I found this story this afternoon. I love it. This is a smart,snarky Sookie. I love the banter. I can't wait for the rest of it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much and thanks for joining me... Promise to have an update in the next couple of days.:D
great chapter! :)
Author's Response: thanks! :D
A really fun chapter! I love all of their banter.
Author's Response: thanks. their banter always comes out so fun. lol.
At first I didn't have an interest in reading this but after reading your other story and how wonderful it is, I thought "what the hell"....
And...this is magnificant! Wow! Can't wait for the updates.....
Now..I'm sure she'll meet their premier screenwriter, William T. Compton....wonder how that is gonna go?
And as always, a story with Godric in it always has a soft spot for me as I just loved his character on TB....
Author's Response: Pat, I'm so glad you decided to give it a chance. I have a background in media arts so most of the technical details should be fairly accurate, and of course I'm in love with Sookie and Eric :D So thanks for joining me, and as I finally have the internet hooked back up at my house, the updates should be a little more regular. If i can stop surfing blogs on Alex that is, lol. As for Bill... we'll just see, won't we? ::rubs her hands together evilly::
This is a beautifully crafted story. Looking forward to the next chapter(s)....
Author's Response: you'll turn my head with such reviews. thank you ::hugs::