Loved it! Can't wait for Pam's reaction to Sookie... :)
I think going to the theater is a very nice idea. Looking forward to reading more. Great job :)
Very sexy. A slow burn is always best.
I look forward to reading more.
I like where you're going with this. Great start!
Author's Response:Glad you liked it, Laura! Really hoping to get something new posted by the end of the week.
I'm glad they're taking it slow. I love how much he is affected by her. Excellent chapter! :)
Author's Response:Thanks! I think taking it slow is really a necessity with this set of circumstances, and it's something that I've personally always been bothered by with Sookie's relationships.
ahh i love when eric wrestles with his own self-control lol.
great chapter.
Author's Response:I'm hoping to get to some more wrestling in the not too distant future. You can take that however you like!
And you've done a great job conveying the variety of their feelings toward each other, from lust to frustration to longing. Your writing flows smoothly and the tale is very enjoyable. I love it! Wonderfully done :)
Author's Response:Thanks so much! This is entirely new territory for me, but I'm really enjoying it! I look forward to hearing more as we go along.
Please write more and quick! haha. Loving the story so far. great work.
Author's Response:You just made my night with that review! I will be writing more in the next week, so keep checking back. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
just read all four chapters in one sitting, and i love it! it's a different idea and i think you should definitely keep with this story. great job!
Author's Response:Thanks so much for the kind words! I hope to make some progress on the next chapter or two in the coming week!
LOL....Sookie's hammered! :)
Author's Response:Well, maybe not totally hammered... it should lead to fun though!
Another great chapter! I'm really enjoying this fic!
Author's Response:Thanks for the repeat reviews! It's nice to know you're enjoying it enough to come back!
He is a charmer! Nice to know he's starting to thaw a bit... :)
Great chapter, I'm excited for more!
Great new story, especially for your first time. I enjoyed it very much. Even though Eric may still be bad to the bone, it's a lot better than Bill getting to her first. More please!
Author's Response:Sorry for the late reply, but I'm so glad you're liking it!
I really love this so far! Im really enjoying reading it! i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response:Sorry for the late reply, but I hope you've enjoyed the next couple of chapters!
Ooh, fantastic story! Please, more!
Author's Response:Sorry to be late in response, but I'm trying to get back to everyone now. Glad to hear you liked the start, and hopefully you've enjoyed the next couple of chapters by now!
Boy, he's clever, hehe. But, I'm quite sure, she's going to surprise him many times yet. Good stuff! Keep writing :) Thanks!
Author's Response:Trying to make certain to at least thank folks for their reviews! Sorry it's taken so long. Hope you're enjoying the new chapters too!
Eric is being a very tricky Viking, but I love it. i do hope that he starts to realize that Sookie is better than a pet to be contolled. Great chapter!
Loved it!!! :)
plotting and devious eric whats not to love!! LOVE THIS STORY!!! Update soon
Author's Response:I love the plotting and devious Eric too! I hope you're enjoying the newer chapters as well!
Wow! Well written first chapter! Can't wait to see what else you have!
Pat
Author's Response:Thanks, Pat! I just figured out how to reply, and I'm trying to make certain to thank everyone! Sorry it took so long! Hope you've read and enjoyed the new chapters too.
This is a great, promising beginning. I'll be watching it. Thank you for sharing :)
That was an incredible start! :)
Love this! But you already knew that. ;-)
Great start, I'm looking forward to reading more!