Wow! I really like your story! please keep going! :))
Thanks!! I am currently writing chapter 9...part way through. Finals are next week so I've just been slow! But I assure you I plan to keep going. :] Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for the review! I appreciate it!
Poor Alessa, she was so strong...
Good to see Eric has softened with his time spent with Sookie....
Yes, I wanted to Eric to be a little weaker. Using Sookie and his relationship as a vice seemed to fit rather well. But I think it will also be something from his past...we will see.
I don't know about the dream.... I guess I didn't really get it.
I think Eric was a little scared that he nearly killed her!
Alessa is certainly a fiesty one...
I guess with the dream, I was intending not to get too explicit...and there are things about Eric that are commonly well known that I started leaving out on purpose.
I love a little fiesty.
Thanks for the reviews. :]
This was hot!!!
Liked Eric's reaction when the other guy danced over to Alessa.... damned vampire jealousy!
Great first chapter... interested to read more.
Thanks! My ideal will to be retain that interest! <3
Thanks for the review!! <3
I really hope that Eric finds somebody who deserves his devotion- forget Sookie!!!!
The last episode of S4 made me angry and this chapter added to it- I hate when Sookie just dismiss Eric and call him just because she needs something. And for her to put Eric as equal to Bill, please. I want to strangle her myself!!!!
Indeed...this will be a reoccurying theme I think...just because I do not have a fondness for Sookie. So I think a lot of it will be Eric's inner torture to want to aid/love Sookie who cannot bring herself to only love him vs Alessa who will be the type of I dont need help and I really mean that? If that makes sense. Sookie tries to be the independent I can do it myself but she's always in danger!! I know as a fanfic reader I love a little heroism but there comes to ap oint where damsel in distress gets boring and you need a bit more depth? Sorry for the mini rant. Writing new chapter as we speak. Getting hot n heavy I must say.